Can you love the version of me?

Can you love the version of me

I don’t, I don’t let anybody else see?

Can you look beyond what’s visible

To appreciate what’s consequential?

Can you let go of your senses

And see the world as I do, free of all pretences?

Can you love the version of me

With which even I don’t very much agree

Can you accept

To be forever at odds

Knowing full well

That sparring has its own rewards

Can you love the version of me

That’s like a shy child hiding behind a tree

Can you draw me out and break the ice

So that I don’t unduly pout but play nice

Can you love the version of me

That didn’t get the memo to be

A little less of what I think

Instead of every bit of what I feel

Can you love the version of me

That truer than truth and set me free?

Can you love the version of me

I don’t, I don’t let anybody else see?

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10 thoughts on “Can you love the version of me?

    1. Thank you so much! Didn’t realise anyone noticed my absence. Thank you very much for the warm welcome. I am touched. I’ll try to live up to the title you’ve bestowed on me ❤️

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      1. Oh you’re very welcome ( Poetess)
        Do you know that after a year and a half… I still remember your beautiful Ballroom poem! Though I have forgotten the title, darn it. 😊 It was
        a truly memorable poem!

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