If you think he doesn’t notice
The corner of your mouth
Where your smile upturns just a tad
When you’re nurturing a naughty thought,
If you think he cannot see
Your eyes glazing over
With a flicker and a frown
As you’re caught in the grip of a bad memory,
If you feel he is oblivious
To the troubles you’re trying to hide
When you speak a little too fast
And gesture a little too often,
If you feel he cannot perceive
The hurt you have been nursing
As you’re trying to imagine a life
Straight out of a fairytale,
If you feel he wouldn’t find out,
The difference between your dreams
And a nightmare most horrifying
Even when he’s deep in his sleep,
Then, oh! My sweet darling,
You’re the one who’s running blind
For when he really loves you
You’re never out of his mind.
You have a real gift for getting right to the heart of the matter by way of some wonderful imagery and phrasing!
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Thank you so much. This really means a lot! You are very kind 💛
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You are welcome. Some of your writing is truly wonderful.
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Good one
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Thank you! ❤️
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Thanks for dropping by today.
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🙂
And thank you! 💕
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A touching and lovely poem, Varnika.
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Thank you so much, Eugenia. I’m really glad you liked it. 💕
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Like an arrow straight to the heart! Beautifully written Varnika.
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Thank you so very much, Chris! 🙂
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Listen Girl,
Poetry speaks to me like no other literary form. I’m not interested in “Likes or Follows,” In fact, I hope you delete this comment. You have my email address now yes? I wish you to know your words move me, that’s all. A proposition for you?? – If you delete this comment, perhaps we could become friends, with no preconceived ideas or judgements. If you were to comment on my blog, I’d not publish it unless you gave you permission. At least I’d have your email address. My best to you Varnika
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Beautifully composed
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Thank you so much!
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Yes definitely. If your truly in love then you notice every little detail of your partner. Very well written
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You’re very right. And thank you so much! 😊💕
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Oh my! This is such a precious piece 🌸
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Thanks, Hun! 😘 Your appreciation means a lot💕 I’m so very glad you liked this.
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This post gives me hope as well as made me sad
Hope in the sense that SHE thinks about me(maybe)
Sad because we are not connected for so long.
Really nice post.
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Believe in hope. It’s all most people have to go on. Should definitely lead somewhere :). And thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and read a beautiful love poem that will let you know – “If He Loves You”!
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Thank you so much for sharing!
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OMG! This is just awesomely stunning!! Your ending is as in other works – a “Killer”. Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!!
Chuck
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Thank you so very much! You flatter me. I, indeed, am honoured. 😊
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Beautiful words spoken.
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Thank you ☺️
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You are Welcome. ☺☺
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Beautifully poignant!
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Thank you! 💕
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As always My pleasure!
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Loved it 💛 Beautifully rendered.
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Thank you very much 😊
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Ur welcome. 😊
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[ Smiles ] Beautiful and intriguing!
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Thank you!
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[ Smiles ] You are welcome, Varnika!
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Beautiful poem, Varnika!
Oh how I love reading your poems 😍
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Thank you! 😍💕
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