I’ve seen her laugh,
Nervously,
Almost
Apologetically,
As if she needed someone’s permission
Before,
Or someone’s approval
After.
I’ve seen her smile,
Falteringly,
For the benefit of the viewer,
As if she’d been chastised too much
For flashing a full-fledged grin.
I’ve seen her eyes glint
And then fade out,
Much too soon,
Much too much,
As if she didn’t have the right,
To express herself,
Through her own countenance.
I’ve seen her
And I wonder what it’d be like
When she burst out
The full glory
Of her inner resplendence
I wonder what it’d be like
To see her
Happy.
That was good! It says so much.
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Thank you so much! 💕
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Your poem is as stunning as you😍
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☺️ you flatterer. Thank you!
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Ha ha ha…😉😉Your most welcome…
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Yes, I’ve seen her. Its you VJ
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Hahaha thanks 😅
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This is so beautiful! I absolutely loved this!
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Thank you so much!
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Love this!
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Thanks love!
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I enjoyed the spiky, staccato rhythm of this one.
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Wow. Simply wow!
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Wow, thank you so much! 💕
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It would be great if you could look at my poems! I could do with some constructive feedback! 🙂
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Hey, sure, I’ll do that. Just give me some time to go through your blog. 😘
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Wow. Beautiful.
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Thank you, Christian! So glad you liked it 🙂
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Love the poem 💙
Beautifully written and beautiful you 😍
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Thank you so much, love! 💙
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A great subject, and you wrote it very well, like behind every smile there’s another story.
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Thank you very much, Ivor! 💕
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Great writing, by the way can you take off the picture of my exgirlfriend…….
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Thanks. I would If it had been put on in the first place.
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Come on now….. now you’re making me remorsefull
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And you’re making me not laugh.
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o.k miss un- laughable, here it goes…. hit it!
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These words really got deep into me. They so much describe a person very close to me. I had to stop for while taking it all in. Thank you!
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I hope you’re able to draw that person out and see him/her beam with happiness. Thank you for reading. Much love 💕
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Thank you very much, to be honest it is my wive and I am desperately trying to drag her out, but it’s tough
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I see. I’m sure she can see your efforts and loves you all the more for it. With time, care and patience, she’ll bloom into herself again. Sending all my good wishes your way! Don’t lose hope and don’t give up on her. 💕
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Much appreciated!
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Wonderfully poignant!
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Thank you ☺️
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Yes, I have seen many of them…
Good writing
Keep up:-)
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😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️ Varnika!! This is so beautiful yaar!! I read it so many times.. your writing and your imagination has resplendence ! I am in love with this one!❤️😍
And the last line!! It was the cherry on the icing!! I wonder what it would be like to see her happy!😍❤️
Bravo!!🙌
Very beautiful picture!😍
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Thank you so much, dear Parth. Your comments always make my day! I am so very glad you liked it.
Thank you again ☺️💕
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It was my pleasure!!❤️ After reading this beauty, which made my day, how can I miss a chance to bring a smile on a face 😊😉 I love your work! Keep it up!😍😍❤️😊
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Beautiful, love it!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Gorgeous
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Thank you! 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank you so much, Sarah! Coming from you, it means a lot. 💕
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Of course! Sorry for being slow.
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I have met those like this and yes, I have wondered. Loved this!
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There’s often a deep inner sadness or melancholy hiding beneath their surface, isn’t it?
And thank you! I’m so glad you liked it 🙂💕
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[ Smiles ] Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you, love 💕
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[ Smiles ] You are most welcome, Varnika.
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