It’s the stars’ fault
I say
Weren’t they supposed to know everything?
And the sky
The blood red sky
Shouldn’t it have stooped?
And the mountains
Snow clad
They should have thawed and cried a river!
The winds
Why didn’t they whistle?
For what you did to me,
The world should have stopped
For a moment
And taken notice.
For what you did to me,
The world should have paused
And refrained itself
from turning.
For what you did on that night
Would take centuries
To make right.
But it didn’t.
The world spun on.
I wonder if that’s why
Today
Your world is burning.
A beautiful, poignant and wonderful piece!
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Thank you!
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Thank you, Varnika, for checking out my page. One of the many good things about blogging poetry is that you meet other poets whose work is extraordinary – yours, I mean. This poem is beautiful, takes you in and speaks awareness. Thank you, again.
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Nice work. You keep getting better and better! ☺💛
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Now, now… no bad thoughts for you young lady today..cause it’s your big day today and I finally got it right ..hehe
Happy birthday sweet friend!.. Hope you have had fun with your friends and family!! Have a great year ahead Varnika.
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…your world is burning…lol hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
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Hahaha well, it didn’t become a saying for no reason.
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Brilliant. Delighted to have discovered your work.
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Thank you! I’m so glad you think so 🙂
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Righteous anger in poetic form!
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Isn’t that the best kind?
Thank you ❤️
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That burning world in the end really crowned the beauty of your poem. Brilliant writing once more!
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Thank you so very much. 💕
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Nice. Quite inconsiderate of the world, not to stop!
I like how he gets it in the end.
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I know, right? So selfish.
Thank you ☺️
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Wow. Every line is powerful and beautifully written! What goes around, comes around in this world that seems to never stop. Loved reading this early in the morning, Vika! ♥️
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excellent! love it!!
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Lovely
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Thank you!
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Time just continues to go on and on.
I have nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award…Do check..
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Thank you. I’ll definitely go see it 🙂
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Your welcome.
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The world ended long ago, we are merely living in nostalgia.
That is why everything is so ephemeral.
Powerful write, Varnika !
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❤️ thank you!
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I love it. Your opening line really grabs and then you are led to deep meanings. Well done.
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Thank you so much. I’m very glad you liked it 💕
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[ Smiles ] Captivating!
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Thank you! ❤️
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[ Smiles ] You are welcome, Varnika!
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😍👏👏👏👏 this work has so many layers, just like the uncountable layers of a flame.. it has the depth of the ocean.. you have tamed the nature with your imagination and have ended it with a lesson!!👏❤️❤️ Wonderful yaar!! 😍 Loved it!
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Thank you so much! 💕
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My pleasure 😊
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