Have you ever experienced the kind of scream so desperate that it rips you apart and, yet, fails to make a single sound? The one where you’re crying out with every iota of your being but your voice gets caught in your throat? You’re not choking, no, you’re only unable to speak. You can hear it inside your head, though.
It begins like any other scream, sans, of course, any sound, but as it proceeds, taking its time, you start getting gripped by a paralyzing fear. You’re overtaken by a growing confusion. Not understanding what’s happening. Panicking, you try to scream even louder, your vocal chords getting strained beyond capacity. Your eyes widen, terrified. You feel like your end is near. You try flailing your limbs in retaliation, as an attempt to free yourself – only to find you cannot do that either.
Have you ever been so helpless and so scared? When you wake up from this dream, do you find yourself drenched in sweat? Your heart working double time trying to calm its palpitations? Do you find your knuckles turned white and your fist clenched so tight that your nails managed to dig into your skin and have drawn streaks of blood? Do you find the ghostly remnants of your scream still lingering on your mind, haunting and knowing?
Because, I do.
Wow.. it give chills and yet enthralls.. great work and keep it up..
Even I have written some poetry on emptiness and void. Please do have a look and feel free to express your valued comments.
Keep up your excellent work. 😀
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Hey, thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it. I’ll surely go through your poetry 💕. And thank you for your words of encouragement.
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Your welcome. 😀
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I think we have all had these moments, you can look back and smile but at the time they were terrifying!
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Beautiful piece but scary though, but i love it.
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Thank you! 🙂 I’m glad you liked it despite its scary nature 💕
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You’re welcome. hoping you can write more of it.
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I’ll be trying my best! 🙂 And thank you again.
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Yes, overtaking by a groaning confusion.
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Well, as long as we wake up everytime. All’s well that ends well.
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Sure
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Scariest story I have read in a long time… Last line makes it twice as haunting…
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🙈 sorry if it was scary. The intention was to only invoke feelings or a memory. And thank you!
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This story was a amazing… I am all about haunting and scary….
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😊
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Oh God yes!😱
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You! I love you! Come wallow in my pool of chilling fear!
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Aw! Thank you! Misery loves company.😙
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Haha yes! And not to forget “double, double, toil and trouble” 😉.
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Chilling… And I do too!
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Phew! So glad I’m not the only one. But too bad for you, though. 😏
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I think we both understand it, gotten used to it in a way
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True. Very sad, but true. 💕
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We should write something together… 😏😗
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Hehe, absolutely right! Pick a dreadful topic. 🤔
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How about we connect on Facebook, talk about it there? ☺️
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Sure. You can find a link to it on my about about or contact me page, I think.
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